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I am sooooooo proud of this. Aranhel made me want to do my own pic with out lines. Really hard and I know I can do better I just have to get time to do it. I love mando's legs, muscly but not too much. YAY

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:iconelizards:
This is a beautiful picture, and it's so romantic ;] I love the pose and the wings and shading. Now onto the critique~

If you look carefully at the man's leg, it is WAY too long, it should be shorter than you made it. Then Look at the woman's thigh, it kind of looks a tad bit wide. Also the wings connected to the woman should be a little lower like the man's, his are pretty much on his back while the woman's looks like it's above her shoulders. The sky background doesn't look as much detailed as the people, but it doesn't really matter I guess.

Overall it's a great picture, and I hope this critique helps you!

~Emmy
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:iconaranehl:
danica this is so surgary lovey sweet you're giving me cavities! but i must say it is very good. its a little trickier without those lines isnt it, haha. keep it up, you get better with every picture girl!

i would recommend experiementing with brush setting, you can create a lot of interesting textures with the preset brushes there in photoshop 7. that way everything in the picture won't look like its made of the same substance.

also (despite your very bright setting) don't be afraid to throw some dark in there to separate you from him. in some places its hard to tell where your arm ends and where HIS skin begins. Even in the brightest clouds there are bits of dark contrast.
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:icontakai-tonzura:
very nice! luv the detail!

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:iconcryingangelnica:
EEEEEEEE THANKS!

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:icontakai-tonzura:
welcome!

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